A crack in the silence

December 12, 2008 at 5:44 PM 9 comments


I wrote this poem in the middle of the night. I even forgot about it. šŸ˜€ Then I discovered it the next day. šŸ™‚ Hope you like it.

Yellow, Orange and Blue,
Dance the flames of the searing fire.
The crackling sound breaking the silence of the night,
Black smoke arises;
Yet light is abundant.
Warmth spreading all around,
While sacrificing the tree which gave life to the fire.
All through the night the fire burns,
Yielding only grey ash when the sun returns.

I wanted to write this because I had to take a break from the story. The story will however be completed in a few posts.

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9 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Su  |  December 12, 2008 at 6:33 PM

    and a life lost, to light other lives…

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  • 2. Nikhil  |  December 12, 2008 at 6:38 PM

    Hehehe! You wrote it and forgot about it? šŸ˜€

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  • 3. Anniyan  |  December 12, 2008 at 9:03 PM

    Su
    And that is life dude. šŸ™‚

    Nikhil
    Err… What can I say? I remembered that I wrote something. That was when I started searching. šŸ˜› šŸ˜€

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  • 4. Dinesh Babu  |  December 12, 2008 at 9:03 PM

    Very nice … Fire is a very important element. It takes life and gives life!

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  • 5. Anniyan  |  December 13, 2008 at 9:46 AM

    Dinesh
    Very true. Glad you liked it. šŸ™‚

    Reply
  • 6. [Sticky]: For newcomers « Care to take a look?  |  December 20, 2008 at 11:39 AM

    […] A crack in the silence […]

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  • 7. manushi  |  December 20, 2008 at 7:02 PM

    deep…. šŸ™‚

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  • 8. smallstar  |  December 21, 2008 at 5:50 AM

    I am curious to read the next parts of this wonderful poem… You are very good at writing, buddy! Compliments! šŸ™‚

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  • 9. Anniyan  |  December 23, 2008 at 7:35 AM

    smallstar
    Thank you. šŸ™‚ This poem is the final part. I was describing the fire. šŸ™‚

    Reply

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