Of all the mind types, yours is the most mellow.
The kiss of an angel.
Posted by Anniyan on October 24, 2008
Note to all my readers: My previous post was deleted because I was not satisfied with the content. I felt it failed to convey the message I wanted it to.
As my second poem, I have written about how my first kiss should be. My first kiss should be with my soul mate. When I find her, I want it to be like so.
Eternal, ever-lasting I want it to be
The first kiss with an angel to me.
It should for a second last,
While feeling like a year is past.
Not lust, nor physical glee,
Sensational the feeling should be.The touch of the two lips should mean eternal bliss
The moment I have my first kiss.
PS: I might move all my creative works to another blog in a while. Will keep you updated about it.
apoorva said
WOW…pretty romantic…
good one…keep it up…
Reema said
Good poem.
BTW Harsha also writing poems on kiss. U too. Hmm… Sorry could not resist. Dont mind
vimal said
hmm…donno what to comment….is it that good a feeling ????
Su said
U sure u still dint have one yet?
Anyways! the last thing i expected was a poem by u, tht too on a kiss, and not feeling stereotypic after i wrote one (even tho it wasn’t wholly a poem. call it a quasi poetic literature)
Actually speaking, that is ow it should be, and i suppose thats how it will be.
@Reema : There is nothing to mind. We both tend to have same brain-waves most of the time
Vimal : Thanks for asking a question i wished someone answered to me, dude…
arvind said
Wow awesome …
smallstar said
Awww you are so sweeeeet!!!
I am keeping reading this poem, and I am ever more surprised for your romanticism, buddy! Great!
Anniyan said
@apoorva
Thank you.
@vimal
I want it to be this way. I don’t know whether it is supposed to be that way.
@Su
No comments on your poem/whatever you call it.
@Reema
Oh I don’t mind at all.
@arvind
Thanks.
@smallstar
Why? shouldn’t I be romantic? 
Thank you.
@EVERYONE
WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY AND SAFE DIWALI!
smallstar said
@Anniyan: ahahah yeah, of course u should… It’s always nice to find romantic boys…
*smiling*
Dinesh Babu said
Good poem, make sure you brush your teeth before you kiss. Avoid eating Garlic 24 hours before kiss.
jai said
hi poet,y hav become a poet so suddenly.good.enjoy.anyways,nice poem.keep it up
kanagu said
Its very romantic yaar.. nice…
Nikhil said
Hmmm… are you in love with someone?
Anniyan said
Dinesh Babu
Thanks for the advice.
That would really come in handy when the time arrives. 
jai
Login when you are commenting.
It is not a sudden transition. This is my second poem if you observe properly. And thanks.
kanagu
Really? Thank you.
Nikhil
Currently, I am in love with my PC. But unfortunately I can’t kiss it.
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manushi said
do soulmates exist…??
Su said
manushi
In my dreamland, I believe they exist. In reality, I’m skeptical. It gets confusing the more you probe about it.
Anniyan said
manushi
I believe they do.
Su
Dude. You are skeptical only because you haven’t had one till now.